1. Read work thoroughly once.
2. Comment (positive and negative) on the work with respect to each of the following:
   1. Convince me why the dynamics can be modeled as a harmonic oscillator
   2. Discuss the advantages/benefits to using such a model for your system
   3. Discuss the disadvantages/drawbacks to using such a model, e.g., limitations of the model, necessary assumptions.
3. Technical writing should be concise and direct. Comment on which sentences could be shortened or left out with no loss of importance.
4. Comment on the correctness or the possible impreciseness of the mathematics (including notation).
5. Suggest one thing that would most improve this work.